Comments on: Persuade Them With Your Words http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/persuade-them-with-your-words/ ActiveCampaign - Development, PHP, Programming & More... Fri, 12 Mar 2010 23:13:28 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Tariq http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/persuade-them-with-your-words/comment-page-1/#comment-68020 Tariq Tue, 27 Jan 2009 22:39:15 +0000 http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/2008/12/26/persuade-them-with-your-words/#comment-68020 Wow... That is really funny in a laugh out loud kind of way. You would think that having the opportunity to get away to the Caribbean would be enough in and of itself. It sounds like someone was trying too hard... Wow… That is really funny in a laugh out loud kind of way. You would think that having the opportunity to get away to the Caribbean would be enough in and of itself. It sounds like someone was trying too hard…

]]> By: Eric von Starck http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/persuade-them-with-your-words/comment-page-1/#comment-68012 Eric von Starck Tue, 27 Jan 2009 15:08:23 +0000 http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/2008/12/26/persuade-them-with-your-words/#comment-68012 Tariq: the kind of writing that come from bland boosterism with no understanding that that that is the alst emotion that coukld or will attract. Here is some from a hotel website - taken at random. The playful side of paradise. A refined, luxury Caribbean resort on Grace Bay, one of the ten best beaches in the world.A place where spacious rooms and stylish suites linger at the edge of a turquoise sea, and the stars are closer than you ever imagined. We invite you to bring your playful side to The Somerset, where luxury and indulgence meet whimsy and surprise. and every day offers a new opportunity to be enchanted. Eric Tariq: the kind of writing that come from bland boosterism with no understanding that that that is the alst emotion that coukld or will attract.
Here is some from a hotel website – taken at random.

The playful side of paradise. A refined, luxury Caribbean resort on Grace Bay, one of the ten best beaches in the world.A place where spacious rooms and stylish suites linger at the edge of a turquoise sea, and the stars are closer than you ever imagined. We invite you to bring your playful side to The Somerset, where luxury and indulgence meet whimsy and surprise. and every day offers a new opportunity to be enchanted.

Eric

]]> By: Tariq http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/persuade-them-with-your-words/comment-page-1/#comment-68002 Tariq Tue, 27 Jan 2009 05:12:13 +0000 http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/2008/12/26/persuade-them-with-your-words/#comment-68002 Thanks Eric. I am doing my best to understand the rules of Corpo-Speak. Thanks Eric. I am doing my best to understand the rules of Corpo-Speak.

]]> By: Eric von Starckl http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/persuade-them-with-your-words/comment-page-1/#comment-67878 Eric von Starckl Thu, 22 Jan 2009 19:34:32 +0000 http://www.activecampaign.com/blog/2008/12/26/persuade-them-with-your-words/#comment-67878 Nicely phrased Traiq. In my hospitality world, thankfully, everyone is stuck in "ad" copy land. Which gives us a fine opportunity with our clients. If only we could persuade them to "understand". And that is another issue. Corpo-Speak rules. Thanks, Eric Nicely phrased Traiq. In my hospitality world, thankfully, everyone is stuck in “ad” copy land. Which gives us a fine opportunity with our clients. If only we could persuade them to “understand”. And that is another issue. Corpo-Speak rules.

Thanks, Eric

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